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shanu
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 Subject: *~****BEST GHAZAL OF THE WEEK****~* Wed Mar 04, 2009 4:47 am |
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Last edited by shanu on Mon Apr 06, 2009 12:28 am; edited 4 times in total
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$am
Chilli Milli
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| Subject: Re: *~****BEST GHAZAL OF THE WEEK****~* Wed Mar 11, 2009 12:15 pm |
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awww lovely....nyc one 
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Lycan
3000 Posts n u r a V.I.P member
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| Subject: Re: *~****BEST GHAZAL OF THE WEEK****~* Wed Mar 11, 2009 11:58 pm |
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nahi acha hay abbb koi ishara saff kah do na,
kahan trak sath do gay tum hamara saf kahdoo na!
judai ki tarhan darya bhi apnay sath chalta hay,
nahi milta kinaray say kinara saf kah doo na!
bahanay apni majbori k kion aa kar sunatay ho,
qasoor iss main nahi koi tumhara saf kah do na!
hamain tanhai k tanay tu na doo gair k aagay,
k ham bhi dhond lain koi sahara saf kah do na!
hamaray hath ki aksar lakeerain milti julti hain,
nahi milta magar koi sitara saf kah do na!
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shanu
Poetry Contest Winner
Number of posts : 9384
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| Subject: Re: *~****BEST GHAZAL OF THE WEEK****~* Thu Mar 12, 2009 1:20 am |
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Vino
Vino De Jerez
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| Subject: Re: *~****BEST GHAZAL OF THE WEEK****~* Thu Mar 12, 2009 11:03 am |
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@ Shanu : ...awsum...  ... @ ALL : ...mere pay thora tars khao...ek bar tu jeetne do...  ...itni sari posts aa gaein...ye khula tazaad nahi ?
Last edited by Sherry on Fri Mar 13, 2009 1:54 am; edited 1 time in total
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Mast Hafsay
Boyz vs Girlz Mod
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| Subject: Re: *~****BEST GHAZAL OF THE WEEK****~* Thu Mar 12, 2009 11:08 am |
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@shanu:- best hai...........  @sherry:- koi baat nahi.............. @shanu:- aik ghazal post karni hai ya or bhi kar saktay hain?????????? 
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shanu
Poetry Contest Winner
Number of posts : 9384
Age : 114
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| Subject: Re: *~****BEST GHAZAL OF THE WEEK****~* Thu Mar 12, 2009 1:27 pm |
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@ all members plz 1 hee post kerni hay 1 week main umer nay 2 kee hain and sherry nay bhe khayal rahay just ghazals hoon no nazams, no shairs no qatas main nay NAZAM post kee hay but that was just for sharing hum loog means main aur komal iss week contest main nahe hoon gay i mean ap kay poost koo judge kiya kerain gay agar kisi ko kuch clear nahe hay tou woh mujhay PM ker lay
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$am
Chilli Milli
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Age : 36
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| Subject: Re: *~****BEST GHAZAL OF THE WEEK****~* Thu Mar 12, 2009 1:32 pm |
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@ Shanuu jo loug zeda posts kereyn une Out ker dena chiya...dats foul 
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shanu
Poetry Contest Winner
Number of posts : 9384
Age : 114
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| Subject: Re: *~****BEST GHAZAL OF THE WEEK****~* Thu Mar 12, 2009 10:58 pm |
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joo ziada kerain gay they have to del their post b4 friday night other wise woh consider hee nahe hoon gay waisay main PM ker raha hoon
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Komal
Poetry Section Mod
Number of posts : 2263
Age : 33
Location : Toronto, Canada
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| Subject: Re: *~****BEST GHAZAL OF THE WEEK****~* Fri Mar 13, 2009 10:41 am |
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shanu
Poetry Contest Winner
Number of posts : 9384
Age : 114
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| Subject: Re: *~****BEST GHAZAL OF THE WEEK****~* Fri Mar 13, 2009 10:48 am |
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congrats umer and khuda kay liyay dp change ker
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$am
Chilli Milli
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Age : 36
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| Subject: Re: *~****BEST GHAZAL OF THE WEEK****~* Fri Mar 13, 2009 10:51 am |
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@ KOMAL : awwwwww finally k0i t0 posti0n ayi mri b p0etry min anywayz i lyk dis secti0n...kafi zouq waley loug paeyy jatey han ider
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Mast Hafsay
Boyz vs Girlz Mod
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| Subject: Re: *~****BEST GHAZAL OF THE WEEK****~* Fri Mar 13, 2009 11:45 am |
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gud work 
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shanu
Poetry Contest Winner
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Age : 114
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Lycan
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Number of posts : 2921
Age : 37
Location : lahore, pakistan
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| Subject: Re: *~****BEST GHAZAL OF THE WEEK****~* Sat Mar 14, 2009 4:14 am |
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thanks janab! sab ki achi theen but final 1 has to win bcoz only 1 can be winner! thanks again i realy like the fourm
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shanu
Poetry Contest Winner
Number of posts : 9384
Age : 114
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| Subject: Re: *~****BEST GHAZAL OF THE WEEK****~* Sat Mar 14, 2009 8:31 am |
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welcome jani next week start hoo gaya hay so do post yaro let me share with u guys from my collection
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shanu
Poetry Contest Winner
Number of posts : 9384
Age : 114
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| Subject: Re: *~****BEST GHAZAL OF THE WEEK****~* Sat Mar 14, 2009 8:32 am |
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Vino
Vino De Jerez
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Age : 34
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| Subject: Re: *~****BEST GHAZAL OF THE WEEK****~* Mon Mar 16, 2009 9:37 am |
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shanu can i post da abuv ghazal ? ...i mean isi topic main dobara post ker dun ? ... ...wo meri taraf say is week k liye... 
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shanu
Poetry Contest Winner
Number of posts : 9384
Age : 114
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| Subject: Re: *~****BEST GHAZAL OF THE WEEK****~* Mon Mar 16, 2009 10:21 am |
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well yara aap mujhay pehlay bata daitay naa tou aap koo yeh wali PM ker daita  this one will not be considered becz me and komal participate nahe kertay hain just yeh aap logon kay sath share kee hay  so u have to post some other
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Lycan
3000 Posts n u r a V.I.P member
Number of posts : 2921
Age : 37
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| Subject: Re: *~****BEST GHAZAL OF THE WEEK****~* Mon Mar 16, 2009 11:06 am |
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uss ko juda hoye bhi zamana buhat hoa
abb kia kahain yeh kissa purana buhat hoa
dhalti na thi kisi bhi jattan say shab e firaq
aye marg e nagihan! tara aana buhat hoa
ham khuld say nikal tu gaye hain par aye khuda!
itnay say wakiye ka fasana buhat hoa
aab ham hain oor saray zamanay ki dushmani
uss say zara sa rabt barhana buhat hoa
aab kiopn na zindagi pay muhabat ko war dain
iss aasihki main jan say jana buhat hoa
aab tak tu dil ka dil say taaruf na ho ska
mana k uss say milna milana buhat hoa
kia kia na ham kharab hoye hain magar yah dil
aye yad e yar tara thikana buhat hoa
kahta tha nasihon say! maray monh na aa lago
phir kia tha aik "hoo" ka bahana buhat hoa
loo phir taray laboon pay usi bewafa ka zikar
ahmad faraz tujh say kaha na! "buhat hoa"
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Mast Hafsay
Boyz vs Girlz Mod
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Age : 35
Location : multan
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| Subject: Re: *~****BEST GHAZAL OF THE WEEK****~* Mon Mar 16, 2009 11:07 am |
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Na main paas us ko bula sakA na main dil ki baat suna saka
Wo hansi hansi mein hi chal di k main haath tak na hila saka
Mujhe kia khaber k wo kia hua,mujhe kitna gehra khumar tha
Main khara tha us k hizaar mein mere ird gird gubaar tha
Yunhi soochta raha dair tak mager us ko kuch na bata saka
Na main paas us ko bula saka na main dil ki baat suna saka
Na hai dushmani kisi din se ab na hai dosti kisi raat se
Ab bacha hi kia jo wo lay gayi mujhe cheen k meri zaat se
Yeh muqaam hi tha ajeeb sa k main khud ko bhi na bacha saka
Na main paas us ko bula saka na main dil ki baat suna saka
Yeh bhi theek hai wo chali gayi mujhe band raste pe chor k
Yeh bhi theek hai k na aaye gi kabhee but ana k wo tor k
Wo juda bhi kaise hui k main koi rasam bhi na nibha saka
Na main paas us ko bula saka na main dil ki baat suna saka
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Vino
Vino De Jerez
Number of posts : 823
Age : 34
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| Subject: Re: *~****BEST GHAZAL OF THE WEEK****~* Mon Mar 16, 2009 1:17 pm |
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Rabte k banane mein umer beet jati hai Faslay simatne mein umer beet jati hai Tot kar bikharne mein der kitni lagti hai Aur phir simatne mein umer beet jati hai ek attal haqiqat hai kis kadar hasinn dhoka zindagi samajne mein umar beet jati hai jo anna ke raston pe dor tak nikal jain un ke phir palatne mein umer beet jati hai raah mein bichar jaye wo jo hamsafar kaisa us ko yaad karne mein umer beet jati hai jab ganwa diya us ko tub humne jana hai dil ki baat kahne mein umer beet jati hai @ Shanu : ...shanu g main bara taiz hun...socho ye ghazal kahan say aaye... 
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Komal
Poetry Section Mod
Number of posts : 2263
Age : 33
Location : Toronto, Canada
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| Subject: Re: *~****BEST GHAZAL OF THE WEEK****~* Mon Mar 16, 2009 10:38 pm |
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aise chup hain ke ye manzil bhi kari ho jaise
teraa milanaa bhi judaai ki ghari ho jaise
apane hi saaye se har gaam laraz jaataa hon
raaste main koi divaar khari ho jaise
manzilain duur bhi hain manzilain nazadik bhi hain
apane hi paaon main zanjir pari ho jaise
kitane naadaan hain tere bhulane vaale ke tujhe
yaad karane ke liye umr pari ho jaise
aaj dil khol ke roye hain to yon Khush hai 'Faraz'
chand lamhon ki ye raahat bhi bari ho jaise
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shanu
Poetry Contest Winner
Number of posts : 9384
Age : 114
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| Subject: Re: *~****BEST GHAZAL OF THE WEEK****~* Tue Mar 17, 2009 1:05 am |
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@ sherry mujhay pata hay kahan say aaye hay good keep it up kisi ko apna source nahe batana hay i am imagining kay tuff hoo gaa competition this time @ all other members keep it up
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sheroz
You Rock... !
Number of posts : 3405
Age : 34
Location : United States of Matti tal
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| Subject: Re: *~****BEST GHAZAL OF THE WEEK****~* Tue Mar 17, 2009 1:37 am |
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dil-e-naadaaN tujhe huaa kya hai ?
aaKHir is dard kee dawa kya hai
ham haiN mushtaaq aur woh bezaar
ya ilaahee ! yeh maajra kya hai ?
maiN bhee muNh meiN zabaan rakhta hooN
kaash ! poocho k "muddaa kya hai" ?
jab ki tujh bin naheeN koee maujood
fir ye hangaama, 'ei KHuda ! kya hai
ye paree chehara log kaise haiN ?
GHamza-o-ishwa-o-'adaa kya hai ?
shikan-e-zulf-e-ambaree kyoN hai ?
nigah-e-chashm-e-soorma sa kya hai ?
sabza-o-gul kahaaN se aaye haiN ?
abr kya cheez hai, hawa kya hai ?
hamko unse wafa ki hai ummeed
jo naheeN jaante wafa kya hai
"haaN bhala kar tera bhala hoga"
aur darvesh kee sada kya hai ?
jaan tum par nisaar karta hooN
maiN naheeN jaanata duaa kya hai
maiNe maana ki kuchch naheeN 'GHalib'
muft haath aaye to bura kya hai ?vocabulary [ paree chehara = angel faced, GHamza = amorous glance, ishwa = coquetry ] [ shikan = wrinkel/fold, ambaree = fragrance]
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nayyab
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| Subject: Re: *~****BEST GHAZAL OF THE WEEK****~* Tue Mar 17, 2009 1:41 am |
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sheroz nyce yara
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zulfi_rocks
Herez Your Gift...All Your Ranks Are Full Now...
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| Subject: Re: *~****BEST GHAZAL OF THE WEEK****~* Tue Mar 17, 2009 1:53 am |
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Hum ne Khushiyoun ki Tarah Dukh bhi Ikathe dekhe
Safha-e-Maazi ko Palto ge to Yaad aaon ga........
Jis Andaaz mein Hote thay Mukhatib Mujhse
Khat kisi Or ko Likho ge to Yaad Aaon ga..........
Ab to Ye Ashk main Hountoun se chura leta hoon
Apne Hathoun se jab Poncho ge to Yaad Aaon ga.
Shaal koun Pehnaye ga Ab December mein tumhain
Baarishoun mein kbhi Bheego ge to Yaad Aaonga...
Is mein Shamil hai mere Naseeb ki Tareeqi bhi.......
Siah rung jab pehno ge to Yaad Aaon ga...............
Last edited by zulfi_rocks on Tue Mar 17, 2009 1:58 am; edited 1 time in total
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sheroz
You Rock... !
Number of posts : 3405
Age : 34
Location : United States of Matti tal
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| Subject: Re: *~****BEST GHAZAL OF THE WEEK****~* Tue Mar 17, 2009 1:56 am |
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thanks nayyab
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zulfi_rocks
Herez Your Gift...All Your Ranks Are Full Now...
Number of posts : 2177
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Location : Faisalabad
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| Subject: Re: *~****BEST GHAZAL OF THE WEEK****~* Tue Mar 17, 2009 2:02 am |
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Nice Selection Mr. Sheroz.
It is One of the Best Lines of Ghalib.
I m 99% sure k Ye Poetry Tumhain Winner Bana de gi.
Best of Luck.
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sheroz
You Rock... !
Number of posts : 3405
Age : 34
Location : United States of Matti tal
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| Subject: Re: *~****BEST GHAZAL OF THE WEEK****~* Tue Mar 17, 2009 2:14 am |
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thanks zulfi je. post aap ki b achi hay. ye tu judge pay depend kertay hay k os k dil ko kon se lagi
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nayyab
You Deserve Bein a V.I.P here
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| Subject: Re: *~****BEST GHAZAL OF THE WEEK****~* Tue Mar 17, 2009 4:35 am |
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Main Apni Raton Ki Fursaton Me Tujhy Manaon To Maan Jana, Agar Kisi Din Main Apny Ansu Jo Le K Aaon To Maan Jana, Ye ek dil Hi Tumhy Dia Tha So Is Ko Tum Ne Hi Tor Dala, Shikasta DiL Ki Jo Kirchion Ko Smet Laon To Maan Jana, Tu Khush Nahi Hai Meri Baqa Per To Sirf Itna Bata, Teri Khushi K Liye Jo Sooli Pe Muskraon To Maan Jana, Tu Badguman Hai Meri Wafa Per To Sirf Aik Bar Azma Le, Jo Haar Jaon To Lout Jana,Jo Jeet Jaon To Maan Jana..........
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