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shanu
Poetry Contest Winner
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 Subject: *~****BEST GHAZAL OF THE WEEK****~* Wed Mar 04, 2009 4:47 am |
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Last edited by shanu on Mon Apr 06, 2009 12:28 am; edited 4 times in total
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zulfi_rocks
Herez Your Gift...All Your Ranks Are Full Now...
Number of posts : 2177
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| Subject: Re: *~****BEST GHAZAL OF THE WEEK****~* Tue Mar 17, 2009 1:53 am |
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Hum ne Khushiyoun ki Tarah Dukh bhi Ikathe dekhe
Safha-e-Maazi ko Palto ge to Yaad aaon ga........
Jis Andaaz mein Hote thay Mukhatib Mujhse
Khat kisi Or ko Likho ge to Yaad Aaon ga..........
Ab to Ye Ashk main Hountoun se chura leta hoon
Apne Hathoun se jab Poncho ge to Yaad Aaon ga.
Shaal koun Pehnaye ga Ab December mein tumhain
Baarishoun mein kbhi Bheego ge to Yaad Aaonga...
Is mein Shamil hai mere Naseeb ki Tareeqi bhi.......
Siah rung jab pehno ge to Yaad Aaon ga...............
Last edited by zulfi_rocks on Tue Mar 17, 2009 1:58 am; edited 1 time in total
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sheroz
You Rock... !
Number of posts : 3405
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| Subject: Re: *~****BEST GHAZAL OF THE WEEK****~* Tue Mar 17, 2009 1:56 am |
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thanks nayyab 
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zulfi_rocks
Herez Your Gift...All Your Ranks Are Full Now...
Number of posts : 2177
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| Subject: Re: *~****BEST GHAZAL OF THE WEEK****~* Tue Mar 17, 2009 2:02 am |
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Nice Selection Mr. Sheroz.
It is One of the Best Lines of Ghalib.
I m 99% sure k Ye Poetry Tumhain Winner Bana de gi.
Best of Luck.
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sheroz
You Rock... !
Number of posts : 3405
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| Subject: Re: *~****BEST GHAZAL OF THE WEEK****~* Tue Mar 17, 2009 2:14 am |
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thanks zulfi je. post aap ki b achi hay. ye tu judge pay depend kertay hay k os k dil ko kon se lagi
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nayyab
You Deserve Bein a V.I.P here
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| Subject: Re: *~****BEST GHAZAL OF THE WEEK****~* Tue Mar 17, 2009 4:35 am |
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Main Apni Raton Ki Fursaton Me Tujhy Manaon To Maan Jana, Agar Kisi Din Main Apny Ansu Jo Le K Aaon To Maan Jana, Ye ek dil Hi Tumhy Dia Tha So Is Ko Tum Ne Hi Tor Dala, Shikasta DiL Ki Jo Kirchion Ko Smet Laon To Maan Jana, Tu Khush Nahi Hai Meri Baqa Per To Sirf Itna Bata, Teri Khushi K Liye Jo Sooli Pe Muskraon To Maan Jana, Tu Badguman Hai Meri Wafa Per To Sirf Aik Bar Azma Le, Jo Haar Jaon To Lout Jana,Jo Jeet Jaon To Maan Jana..........
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Komal
Poetry Section Mod
Number of posts : 2263
Age : 33
Location : Toronto, Canada
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Mast Hafsay
Boyz vs Girlz Mod
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| Subject: Re: *~****BEST GHAZAL OF THE WEEK****~* Tue Mar 17, 2009 7:23 pm |
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ham ne tu umeed he chor di je innay saray log hain 
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Komal
Poetry Section Mod
Number of posts : 2263
Age : 33
Location : Toronto, Canada
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Mast Hafsay
Boyz vs Girlz Mod
Number of posts : 12116
Age : 35
Location : multan
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| Subject: Re: *~****BEST GHAZAL OF THE WEEK****~* Tue Mar 17, 2009 7:48 pm |
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shanu
Poetry Contest Winner
Number of posts : 9384
Age : 114
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| Subject: Re: *~****BEST GHAZAL OF THE WEEK****~* Wed Mar 18, 2009 6:46 am |
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$am
Chilli Milli
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Age : 36
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| Subject: Re: *~****BEST GHAZAL OF THE WEEK****~* Wed Mar 18, 2009 9:18 pm |
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Dareeche Se Jhankti Wo Larki Ajeeb Dukh Se Bhari Hui He, K Is k Aangan Me Phull Par Ek Neelii TiTli Mari Hui He Azanon Me Khoi Khoi , Kabhi Namazon Me Roi Roi, Wo Esey Dunya Ko Dekhti He K Jesey Is Se Dari Hui He Durood Se Mehki Mehki Sansen,Wazifa Parhti Hui Wo Ankhen, K Ek Shamma-e-Umeed Un Me, Kai Baras Se Dhari Hui He Wo Dukh Ki Chadar Me Lipti Lipti,Wo Kaley Kapron Me Simti Simti, Muhabbat Us Ne Kisi Se ,Shayad Meri Tara Hi Kari Hui He
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jawadzaheer
3 Topics Banao Halla Gulla Main
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Age : 40
Location : karachi
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| Subject: Re: *~****BEST GHAZAL OF THE WEEK****~* Thu Mar 19, 2009 5:15 am |
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GuzraY hOe TawEel zamanaY K bad bhe Dil main raha haY WOO chOor K janay K baad bhe  pehlOo main reh k Dil ne diA hay bOhat fareeb... RAKHA hay US ko YAD ,bhulanaY k baad bhe .... Go TU yahan pe haY ,magar to yahan nhe... Dil mUTmaeeN nhe TERay aanay K baad bhe lagta hay kuch kaha hi nhe hay usaY hUm ne DIL ka TMAM haal sunaneY K baad bHE.....
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Lycan
3000 Posts n u r a V.I.P member
Number of posts : 2921
Age : 37
Location : lahore, pakistan
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| Subject: Re: *~****BEST GHAZAL OF THE WEEK****~* Fri Mar 20, 2009 9:59 am |
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result kab aye ga! i think aaj late ho jaye ga! bcoz hamaray jo judge sahab hain aaj woo phans chukay hain! hahahahahah  main wait kar raha hon sir jee!
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shanu
Poetry Contest Winner
Number of posts : 9384
Age : 114
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| Subject: Re: *~****BEST GHAZAL OF THE WEEK****~* Fri Mar 20, 2009 11:11 am |
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Last edited by shanu on Mon Apr 06, 2009 12:31 am; edited 1 time in total
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Lycan
3000 Posts n u r a V.I.P member
Number of posts : 2921
Age : 37
Location : lahore, pakistan
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| Subject: Re: *~****BEST GHAZAL OF THE WEEK****~* Fri Mar 20, 2009 11:14 am |
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ohh tahnko thanko sir ji! above topic@ kia chala raha hay wahan par? gaye thay ya nahi?????
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Lycan
3000 Posts n u r a V.I.P member
Number of posts : 2921
Age : 37
Location : lahore, pakistan
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| Subject: Re: *~****BEST GHAZAL OF THE WEEK****~* Fri Mar 20, 2009 11:15 am |
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and thans komal and aal members of the fourm they all giving me a realy good time
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shanu
Poetry Contest Winner
Number of posts : 9384
Age : 114
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Lycan
3000 Posts n u r a V.I.P member
Number of posts : 2921
Age : 37
Location : lahore, pakistan
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| Subject: Re: *~****BEST GHAZAL OF THE WEEK****~* Fri Mar 20, 2009 11:21 am |
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kia next week ki ghazal abhi post kar saktay hain????
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Komal
Poetry Section Mod
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Age : 33
Location : Toronto, Canada
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$am
Chilli Milli
Number of posts : 7107
Age : 36
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| Subject: Re: *~****BEST GHAZAL OF THE WEEK****~* Fri Mar 20, 2009 11:30 am |
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COngrats Umer....... althaugh mjhe pata ha meri b achi thi n 4 next week : Nazar me ZuLmat badan main thandak Jamal kitna ajeeb sa tha, Mian us ki chahat me ghar se nilka tu Haal kitna ajeeb sa Tha, Na main ney osay khatoot likhe na os ney meri panah chahi, dono ko apni bey khudi pe malal kitna ajeeb sa tha, wo apni raton me chand dekhe main apni raton main os ko souchon, badalte lamhon me souch ka yeh visaal kitna ajeeb sa tha, safar akelay he kaat lo gey main ne poucha tu ro diya wo, jawab kitna ajeeb sa tha sawal kitna ajeeb sa tha...!!!
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Lycan
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Number of posts : 2921
Age : 37
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| Subject: Re: *~****BEST GHAZAL OF THE WEEK****~* Fri Mar 20, 2009 11:33 am |
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suna hay loog usy ankh bhar k deakhtay hain
su uss k shahar main kuch din thaher k deakhty hain
suna hay rabt hay uss ko kharab haloon say
so apnay aap ko barbad kar k deakhtay hain
suna hay dard ki gahak hay chasm-e-nazuk uss ki
so ham bhi uss ki gali say guzar k deakhtay hian
suna hay uss ko bhi hay shair o shairi say shagaf
so ham bhi mojzay apnay hunar k deakhtay hain
suna hay bolay tu batoon say phool jhartay hain
yeh baat hay tu chalo baat kar k deakhtay hain
suna hay rat usay chand takta rahta hay
sitaray baam e falak say utar k deakhtay hain
suna hay din main ussy titlian statite hain
suna hay rat ko jugno thaher k deakhtay hian
suna hay uss k laboon say gulaab jaltay hian
so ham bahar par ilzam dhar k deakhtay hian
suna hay uss k badan k trash aysay hain
k phool apni kabain katar k deakhtay hian
chalay tu gardishain uss ka tawaf karti hian
rukay tu uss ko zamanay thahar k deakhtay hian
bas ik nighah say loot layta hay kafila dil ka
so rah-ravan-e-tamana bhi dar k deakhty hain
abb uss k shaher main thahrain k kooch kar jain
FARAZ aao sitaray safar k deakhtay hain.............
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shanu
Poetry Contest Winner
Number of posts : 9384
Age : 114
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| Subject: Re: *~****BEST GHAZAL OF THE WEEK****~* Fri Mar 20, 2009 11:47 am |
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wah wah abhe say hee entries 
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Lycan
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Age : 37
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| Subject: Re: *~****BEST GHAZAL OF THE WEEK****~* Fri Mar 20, 2009 12:06 pm |
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sir ji kia iss say best koi ho sakti hay?????????
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Vino
Vino De Jerez
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| Subject: Re: *~****BEST GHAZAL OF THE WEEK****~* Sat Mar 21, 2009 2:34 am |
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abey umer tu fir jeet gaya ... ... r yar God promise ye ghazal maine post kerni thi dis tym....  ...chalo bara khazana jama ho gaya hai...dhond lein gay koi...kab tak jeete ga han...  Shanu n Komal.....great job...impressive han...
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AngelBee
User Ranks Moderator
Number of posts : 3760
Age : 114
Location : cItY oV AnGeLz ... (:
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| Subject: Re: *~****BEST GHAZAL OF THE WEEK****~* Sat Mar 21, 2009 4:35 am |
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zulfi_rocks
Herez Your Gift...All Your Ranks Are Full Now...
Number of posts : 2177
Age : 34
Location : Faisalabad
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| Subject: Re: *~****BEST GHAZAL OF THE WEEK****~* Sat Mar 21, 2009 5:06 am |
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Kya baat hai........... 
Last edited by zulfi_rocks on Tue Mar 24, 2009 2:38 am; edited 1 time in total
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zulfi_rocks
Herez Your Gift...All Your Ranks Are Full Now...
Number of posts : 2177
Age : 34
Location : Faisalabad
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| Subject: Re: *~****BEST GHAZAL OF THE WEEK****~* Sat Mar 21, 2009 1:54 pm |
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Jab Se Tu Ne Mujhe Deewana Bana Rakha Hai,
Sang Har Shakhs Ne Hathoun Mein Utha Rakha Hai.Us k Dil per Bhi ghadi Ishq ki Guzri Hogi,
Naam Jis Ne Bhi Mohabbat Ka Saza Rakha hai.Patharo Aaj Mere sir Pe Baraste Kyun Ho,
Maine Tum Ko Bhi Kabhi Apna Khuda Rakha Hai.Pi Ja Ayyaam Ki talkhi ko Bhi Hans K Nasir,
Gham Ko Sehne Mein Bhi Qudrat Ne Maza Rakha Hai.Nasir Kazmi........
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Faisal
socho agar Most Wanted ka title na mila aapko 10,000 posts pay tu ?
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| Subject: Re: *~****BEST GHAZAL OF THE WEEK****~* Tue Mar 24, 2009 5:11 pm |
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Ye Jo Xindgi ki kitab hai
Ye kitab bhi kia kitab hai
Kahin ik haseen sa khab hai
Kahin jaan leva Azab hai
Kabhi Kho lia Kabhi pa lia
Kabhi Roo lia kabhi Ga lia
Kahin Rehmaton ki hain barishein
Kahin Tishnagi be hisab hai
Kahin Chaon hai Kahin Dhoop hai
Kahin aur hi koi Roop hai
Kahin Cheen leti hai har khushi
Kahin Mehrban Behisab hai
Ye jo Xindgi ki kitab hai
Ye Kitab bhi kia kitab hai
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shanu
Poetry Contest Winner
Number of posts : 9384
Age : 114
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| Subject: Re: *~****BEST GHAZAL OF THE WEEK****~* Wed Mar 25, 2009 9:46 am |
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Nice HAFSAbadan ke donoN kinaaroN se jal rahaa huuN maiN
ke chhuu rahaa huuN tujhe, aur pighal rahaa huuN maiN
tujhii pe Khatm hai jaanaaN mire zavaal kii raat
tuu ab tulu bhii ho jaa, ke Dhal rahaa huuN maiN
bulaa rahaa hai miraa jaamaa-zeb milne ko
to aaj pairahan-e-jaaN badal rahaa huuN maiN
Ghubaar-e-rahguzar kaa ye hauslaa bhii to dekh
havaa-e-taazaa! tire saath chal rahaa huuN maiN
maiN Khvaab dekh rahaa huuN ke vo pukaartaa hai,
aur apne jism se baahar nikal rahaa huuN maiN
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Awz
Halla Gulla Mod
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| Subject: Re: *~****BEST GHAZAL OF THE WEEK****~* Wed Mar 25, 2009 4:06 pm |
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duur hai manzil, raaheinn mushkil, aalam hai tanhaaii kaa
aaj mujhe ehasaas huaa hai apnii shikastaa-paaii kaa
dekh ke mujh ko duniya vaale kehne lage hain devaanaa
aaj vahan hai ishq jahaN kuch Khauf nahi rusvaaii kaa
chor dein rasm-e-Khud-nigaarii ko, tor dein apna emaan
Khatam kiye deta hai zaalim ruup teri angdhaii kaa
main ne ziyaein husun ko baKhshiin us kaa to koii zikar nahi
lekin ghar ghar main charchaa hai aaj terii raanaaii kaa
ehl-e-havas ab pachtaata hai Duub ke bahar-e-Gham mein 'AWz'
pehle na tha en becharon ko andaza gehraaii kaa
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